See my comments on 'Alien' as they stand for this review too...
I would really recommend that you get someone to proofread your writing before you post it, just to check that there aren't any random words floating around in there; here, for example - 'we are taken to small colt sack in America' - I am assuming you meant cul-de-sac ?
Hi Dan,
ReplyDeleteSee my comments on 'Alien' as they stand for this review too...
I would really recommend that you get someone to proofread your writing before you post it, just to check that there aren't any random words floating around in there; here, for example -
'we are taken to small colt sack in America' - I am assuming you meant cul-de-sac ?