Hi there,It's really important that first years a) follow the group blog as a matter of habit and b) follow the blogs of year 2 and year 3 students, because we know that, by doing so, year 1 students develop more quickly and get more organised. You might have done all this already, but I know there are those who have not, and I'm keen to get everyone up to speed.If you haven't done so already, you need to add these to your Blogger reading list, by clicking on the 'ADD' button on your dashboard, pasting in the URLs and then 'following pubically'. Group Blog (You must be following this/checking this feed daily at least).http://ucarochester-cgartsandanimation.blogspot.co.ukYear 2http://www.rjfenton.blogspot.co.uk/http://rubynewland.blogspot.co.uk/http://candice-hiufu.blogspot.co.uk/http://joshaldis.blogspot.co.uk/http://heidigrover.blogspot.co.uk/http://hannah-milliner.blogspot.co.uk/http://anthonyjfaulkner.blogspot.co.uk/http://adamrichardstone.blogspot.co.uk/http://megan--doyle.blogspot.co.uk/http://ashley-nwachukwu.blogspot.co.uk/http://sukhighai.blogspot.co.uk/http://dannyrollings.blogspot.co.uk/http://ayunie-adiana.blogspot.co.uk/http://scottdturner.blogspot.co.uk/http://liviwilmore.blogspot.co.uk/http://msliksa.blogspot.co.uk/http://tomaboothby.blogspot.co.uk/http://samcannoncgart.blogspot.co.uk/http://gemmatitch.blogspot.co.uk/http://rwinventions.blogspot.co.uk/http://scarlettfreeman.blogspot.co.uk/Year 3http://peta-gayebrown.blogspot.co.uk/http://kinblob.blogspot.co.uk/http://meganhowett.blogspot.co.uk/http://a-animator.blogspot.co.uk/http://georgenwosisi.blogspot.co.uk/http://samantha-niemczyk.blogspot.co.uk/http://stevenpayneuca.blogspot.co.uk/http://vikkirh.blogspot.co.uk/http://alexnedmonds.blogspot.co.uk/http://shannonkmason.blogspot.co.uk/http://jakejbryant.blogspot.co.uk/http://george-hind.blogspot.co.uk/http://emily-clarkson.blogspot.co.uk/http://kymmumford.blogspot.co.uk/http://nadiayadallee.blogspot.co.uk/
Hi Dan,Ok, so the bibliography is looking a bit better, now that you have the images separately listed... but you are still missing information in the illustrations list. Have another look at the guide...Also, don't forget to italicise all your quotes, as well as any other film titles you mention. The reference after the quote only has to contain the author's surname and the date, not the full name, and in the bibliography, the surname comes first, followed by the initial - these names are then organised alphabetically, so your list would be Bradshaw, P.Romney, J.Walters, B.There is something strange going on with your formatting...I expect it's to do with when you moved it into Scribd. Always preview it before posting, to make sure that it looks professional.