These are looking promising Dan...keep them coming! More expressive thumbnails as soon as possible. I like 56, it feels the most unique...but I think some of your line work is overshadowing the actual compositions. Try a page with purely brushwork, nice expressive mark making to see what may come. This may help you get away from some of the more generic compositions. Go go go!
Your classmate, Dan Reason has a new blog url after some tech gremlins messed with his original - please add him to your reading list, as he's been follower-less since day one :(http://dreason479.blogspot.co.uk
As far as interiors go 65 really captures a good sense of atmosphere I feel